my 1st PROFESSIONAL site

edwelly · May 25th, 2002, 01:55 AM

by professional, I mean I got paid...
please check out the site and let me know what you think, please.
Reflections-By-Design
FYI: All of the content in the site was choosen by the customer and so was the wording.
please DO NOT reply to the email on the site. This is not my site ans i don't want the customer getting emails for me. If you would like to reply to me in private, please PM me or just post your thoughts here. ALL thoughts are welcome and appreciated...
as always, thanks so much!!!
---edwelly

**Martoch** · May 25th, 2002, 02:03 AM

The site looks super!!! Very professional, great job bud! One thing I quicky noticed though...not sure if you just copied what they told you to put or not, but this sentence: We are always experimenting with new products and pushing the limits on creating something new, attending workshops, seminars, to learn a new process as soon as its offered. is gramatically incorrect.

I would put something like We are always experimenting with new products and pushing the limits on creating something new while attending workshops/seminars to learn new processes as soon as they are offered.
Just trying to help a little...

Mike

EDIT: I just noticed a few other places where the grammar needs some tweaking...I'm not trying to be a nag, but I would assume they want the best site possible.

edwelly · May 25th, 2002, 02:05 AM

Mike: I totally agree with what you said. i am going to sit down and ask the customer if I can reword some of the content. I want their permission 1st... Thanks a lot my friend...
---edwelly

**Martoch** · May 25th, 2002, 02:11 AM

You are quite welcome...let me know if you need any help with the rewording, I'll PM you my e-mail address and we can work on it as a team. (You'll get all the $ of course!) I'm pretty smooth when it comes to writing...

Mike

MDS · May 25th, 2002, 02:36 AM

Pretty good

BTW I like your DMB site better

^hyd^ · May 25th, 2002, 04:58 PM

Nice job! Only thing I noticed was that the frames are resizable. Are they supposed to be?

cheers!

Dragontech · May 25th, 2002, 05:00 PM

good site

dragontech

crystaldragon · May 25th, 2002, 05:03 PM

Very nice!
The customer may have provided all the content, But it was your work that put together and made it work for them.
Way to go!
JD

Thud · May 25th, 2002, 05:07 PM

Good job, edwelly!

As was pointed out, most of the wording on there leaves quite a bit to be desired. But as you pointed out, that's what they wanted, so it doesn't reflect on your work. Depending on how closely you're working with them to develop their business, you might recommend some changes there. Otherwise, you should be happy with a job well done!

Angela · May 25th, 2002, 05:14 PM

Nice looking site. Martoch is certainly right about the paragraph on the home page--it is awkwardly written but could be easily improved. I noticed that some of the images enlarge quite a bit, and some do not. If I were a customer, I would want to see the larger enlargements for all the pieces, if that were possible.

All the pages loaded really well, and I think it's fun how the swirling words follow the cursor on the opening page!