Razorbytescomputers (finished)

[pullmyfoot]

Razorbytes Custom Computers

I had a thread about this I know. But I dont I'm going to make any changes to it for now (I know Roots you gave me some suggestions, but they are a little too complicated for me to have to learn at the moment! I'll concentrate on my studies and maybe during my month-long June break I'll tweak my site more) because I'm a little behind on schoolwork.

Once again @ Roots, you said my previous site looked nice and professional. Does this match up? IMO I think it looks much better .

FYI this is something like what my old site looked like. IMO its too segmented and detached.

Razorbytes Custom Computers

Let me know what you guys think

[sr71000]

I agree with your comments about the old site. I think things there just seemed to separated. My only issue with your new site is that the background behind the text is the same as the background all the way outside the content area. It gives a really weird feeling on a high resolution monitor. That's the one thing I liked about the old page better. I think it dealt with the unused space around the edges better.

I also don't know if I like the pic of the computer on the homepage.

Last comment is everything is just so dark!!

Overall I think it was an upgrade, but just pointing out the stuff I notice. Not that I think I could do any better honest... ya know? Presentation isn't really my thing. I'm a tech design/code monkey kinda guy.

-Kevin

[RicheemxX]

I'm short because I'm out in a sec but ditton the home page, you can't tell what the pic is so its not good. Second check it in IE in IE8 on W7 its not the same as FF3.

[ShyguyXPC]

so far looking better, much more so than the old site.

have to agree with rich on the pic though, its hard to tell what it is, but I'm suspecting its an illuminated PC case of some sort.

[GroundZero3]

I thought it was an air heater

[pullmyfoot]

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Originally Posted by ShyguyXPC

so far looking better, much more so than the old site.

have to agree with rich on the pic though, its hard to tell what it is, but I'm suspecting its an illuminated PC case of some sort.

Actually it is exactly that! Okok I'm changing I'm changing already!

[Rootstonian]

I told him that 1,000 times and he didn't listen to me! I refuse to visit his site till that picture is gone LOL

[pullmyfoot]

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Originally Posted by Rootstonian

I told him that 1,000 times and he didn't listen to me! I refuse to visit his site till that picture is gone LOL

Well I was too lazy to get a better pic!

[Rootstonian]

Pictures of Computers, Mouse, Surfing the Internet, Servers, Supercomputers, Chips, z chip, Silicon, Photography, Photos

there...second Google hit for "Pictures of computuers"

[RicheemxX]

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Originally Posted by GroundZero3

I thought it was an air heater

That's what it looks like a radiator from the houses back east. I don't even have a clue what its supposed to be. Looks like maybe a NAS case or a server of some sort??

Just a thought about one aspect of the site, the 80+ page.

For one I wouldn't make that a BIG selling point on the main page. That is one of the biggest points that stands out. You want the focus to be more on what you do and what you offer. 80+ should be secondary. Tone that down a bit. Secondary to that most "high end" customers don't worry about energy efficiency and if they do they know the PSU is the component that "draws power from the wall socket".

Don't mean to sound like an ASS but if you are going for the HIGH end gamer market or custom build market, market it that way and don't use a lot of layman's terms. People that seek out custom boxes most likely know their stuff...would you want someone to talk down to you when you are trying to plan a $2k custom build?

I'd also skip the heading

"Are computers from Razorbytes Energy Efficient?"

and then start then paragraph with

"Make a choice you can feel good about."